Cell Phones Quotations
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The writer’s inability to adequately explain his thinking also makes it difficult for me to agree with him. For instance, the repetitive use of the word we is quite confusing and makes it harder to understand who the writer is talking about. “We killed 120 kids and small-statured women with airbags and there was a huge government, industry, and societal response”(paragraph 4)”. Even after reading it over a few times, I am still unclear on who is being talked about. The author’s strategy of using quotations that are then refuted is misleading. After the quotations were stated, I expected the author to explain each one. Instead, each quotation was refuted in the paragraph. “There isn’t enough evidence to prove that using a cell phone while driving causes accidents(first paragraph). After this statement, the writer continues on to prove that there is evident that they cause accidents.
The writer’s inability to adequately explain his thinking also makes it difficult for me to agree with him. For instance, the repetitive use of the word we is quite confusing and makes it harder to understand who the writer is talking about. “We killed 120 kids and small-stature women with airbags and there was a huge government, industry, and societal response” (paragraph 4)”. Even after reading it over a few times, I am still unclear on who is being talked about. The author’s strategy of using quotations that are then refuted is misleading. After the quotations were stated, I expected the author to explain each one. Instead, each quotation was refuted in the paragraph. “There isn’t enough evidence to prove that using a cell phone while driving causes accidents (first paragraph). After this statement, the writer continues on to prove that there is evident that they cause accidents.
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